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(Message started by: megajester on May 30^th, 2011, 3:10pm)

Title: Mr Box
Post by megajester on May 30^th, 2011, 3:10pm

Ok so here's a crazy impulsive attempt at a comic strip...
http://i926.photobucket.com/albums/ad104/istanbulluingiliz/mrboxtimemachine.jpg

Title: Re: Mr Box
Post by Eltripas on May 30^th, 2011, 9:13pm

Not bad but the punch line is weak for such a long strip, or it seems weak to me because of the way it was presented and that there is way too much text without a joke in the middle.

Title: Re: Mr Box
Post by megajester on May 31^st, 2011, 3:10am

OK, well thanks.

I did try to make the presentation amusing by parodying inane comic book soliloquies, mentioning the readers, and alluding to the writer's laziness. Also I'm making fun of the whole idea of time travel and the metaphysical aspects often overlooked in such films. Maybe it's all just too subtle.

Title: Re: Mr Box
Post by RonWeasley on May 31^st, 2011, 8:36am

By the middle I realized I should not be worrying all the details. This was a silly adventure and I enjoyed it as such. And I like ZWOINK!!!

Title: Re: Mr Box
Post by megajester on May 31^st, 2011, 2:45pm

on 05/31/11 at 08:36:33, RonWeasley wrote:

And I like ZWOINK!!!

Yeah, I kept saying it under my breath while I was making the cartoon coz it sounds so cool
;D