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megajester
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Ok so here's a crazy impulsive attempt at a comic strip...
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Re: Mr Box
« Reply #1 on: May 30th, 2011, 9:13pm » |
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Not bad but the punch line is weak for such a long strip, or it seems weak to me because of the way it was presented and that there is way too much text without a joke in the middle.
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megajester
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Re: Mr Box
« Reply #2 on: May 31st, 2011, 3:10am » |
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OK, well thanks.
I did try to make the presentation amusing by parodying inane comic book soliloquies, mentioning the readers, and alluding to the writer's laziness. Also I'm making fun of the whole idea of time travel and the metaphysical aspects often overlooked in such films. Maybe it's all just too subtle.
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Re: Mr Box
« Reply #3 on: May 31st, 2011, 8:36am » |
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By the middle I realized I should not be worrying all the details. This was a silly adventure and I enjoyed it as such. And I like ZWOINK!!!
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Re: Mr Box
« Reply #4 on: May 31st, 2011, 2:45pm » |
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on May 31st, 2011, 8:36am, RonWeasley wrote:
Yeah, I kept saying it under my breath while I was making the cartoon coz it sounds so cool
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